All Comments on 'The Desert Ch. 06'

Quite a good job. It is amazing that this is such a good story that includes a lot of the stuff for which people come to this site.

One can almost envision this as a "real" book on the shelves of Barnes & Noble.

I look forward to many more!

Feels like you have come to the end of a phase in your writing.

You are right to take a break and refresh.

I have enjoyed your story immensely and hope that you will continue at some time in the future

A deft touch, great content and tone with a considerable measure of bonafide warmth - hoping for more!

Not once have i ever given 5 stars to other stories and i have been on this site for years.

please more i look for this story ever day