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by HarryHill
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Desejoover 11 years agoYou have really evolved in your writing, Mr. H, and developing an easily identified voice. I like the impressionist feel of this, its like flipping through one of those books where the images change page by page. And I like the ending.
Now to the fix-t suggestions: proofread! Spelling: Cialis, submits, maybe pen's. Paper's or papers skin? I don't get that either way. huh?
Iread2relaxover 11 years agoHOT!
This gave me some very vivid pictures. You use of words to paint this picture was superb. YOU GET 5 STARS!
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