It was short but more intriguing than half of the stories on here. Can't wait for an update. The story has already piqued an interest for me.
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Anonymous01/15/13
life
OMGoodness. Intense and somuch a part of my life. But now he is long gone from my world. He claims of love during sexual bliss. Leaving me lost and wondering why I allowed him to treat me in such a manner.
Here is to hoping you continue
Thanks everyone who commented, favorited, read it and voted! This is my first submission and I think I've waited long enough. I will be updating soon, hopefully before April is out. Thanks again!:)
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Five Stars.
It was short but more intriguing than half of the stories on here. Can't wait for an update. The story has already piqued an interest for me.
life
OMGoodness. Intense and somuch a part of my life. But now he is long gone from my world. He claims of love during sexual bliss. Leaving me lost and wondering why I allowed him to treat me in such a manner.
Here is to hoping you continue
More !!!
More, more, more Please ! I wanna know more !
GAHHHH
This ending really killed me
Very short, and...
needs a little editing, but it looks as if you have real potential as a writer.
Five, for starters.
Thanks everyone!
Thanks everyone who commented, favorited, read it and voted! This is my first submission and I think I've waited long enough. I will be updating soon, hopefully before April is out. Thanks again!:)
patiently waiting....
for the next chapter :-)
very good
On to the next chapter...
Delicious
More please
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