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Susan I really enjoy your writing, stretching your fantasied as far you do. Your are a courtesan of the mind. In the words of Hunter Thompson "buy the ticket, take the ride". Keep going.
Quite a surprise
You had me hooked, thinking of Lola. I was so hard, waiting for the conclusion. Waiting for the big finish... ready to join in... then...
Great story!
Very descriptive
Makes you think that you are there with him.
The Grass Ain't Always Greener...
I was captivated as i read this absorbing story as it continued to build toward a much anticipated crescendo, but alas that anticipation was thwarted when the story took an unexpected twist when the lovely Lola turned out to be a man disguised as the almost perfect beautiful woman. This particular surprise element in the story is demonstrable of your insightful story writing skills Susan which you are adapt to temper a readers perceived predictably. The salient point in the story typically shows that sometimes ''The Grass Ain't Always Greener...'' on the other side.
The story did however have a seemingly happy and unexpected ending for our lawn carer friend.
Thank you for posting another masterpiece story Susan.
Sincerely, Arwon
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