The anonymous critic thinks the piss play is piss poor.
I think it's just part of an entertaining story of full out unihibited kinky debauchery.
A nice piece of pure pornography.
I give it 5 stars and hope the author comes up with Ch 03 soon.
Was the incest part of this story a joke?.Unless the story teller starts fucking his mother, in the next chapter he should move this story to another category.Sorry but you lost me.INCEST is about family members who have sex with other members of there family . Not with strangers in a fetish bar...... .....LAROC OF AGES
I want to make it clear to those who are leaving negative comments, I posted them in this section do to the general category that the story is headed. And if read through and any attention paid at all, there is incest involve in both chapters, the first between Maggie and her cousin Ann in a threesome with Jeffery, Ann's boyfriend. In the second chapter, it is between Jeffery and his mother, Suzette, the owner of the fetish club.
And for those who do not wish to read about piss play and the like, (there will be no scat, as I am not a fan of that fetish either) you do not have to read the story.
And to William Smyth, thanks for your support and I am sorry it has taken me so long to get chapter 2 out. I have a million and one other things on my plate as well. This is just a hobby, I do not claim to be a professional writer and so I get to writing when I can.
Thank you all for your votes and comments.
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Anonymous02/16/13
love piss play!
Please write more. There isn'tenough piss fetish material around. I love it in fiction and real life.
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Anonymous10/10/13
Two thumbs up
I think it was a great piece and I look forward to more chapters
English
Yuck!
Piss play is piss poor!
Everyone is entitled
The anonymous critic thinks the piss play is piss poor.
I think it's just part of an entertaining story of full out unihibited kinky debauchery.
A nice piece of pure pornography.
I give it 5 stars and hope the author comes up with Ch 03 soon.
I gave it 3 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Was the incest part of this story a joke?.Unless the story teller starts fucking his mother, in the next chapter he should move this story to another category.Sorry but you lost me.INCEST is about family members who have sex with other members of there family . Not with strangers in a fetish bar...... .....LAROC OF AGES
I appreciate the feedback
I want to make it clear to those who are leaving negative comments, I posted them in this section do to the general category that the story is headed. And if read through and any attention paid at all, there is incest involve in both chapters, the first between Maggie and her cousin Ann in a threesome with Jeffery, Ann's boyfriend. In the second chapter, it is between Jeffery and his mother, Suzette, the owner of the fetish club.
And for those who do not wish to read about piss play and the like, (there will be no scat, as I am not a fan of that fetish either) you do not have to read the story.
And to William Smyth, thanks for your support and I am sorry it has taken me so long to get chapter 2 out. I have a million and one other things on my plate as well. This is just a hobby, I do not claim to be a professional writer and so I get to writing when I can.
Thank you all for your votes and comments.
love piss play!
Please write more. There isn'tenough piss fetish material around. I love it in fiction and real life.
Two thumbs up
I think it was a great piece and I look forward to more chapters
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