Gamer Goddess Ch. 01

Absolutely fantastic.

One of the absolute best stories on the site.

You sir are a gentleman and a scholar.

Fucking awesome!

I just finished the first chapter, and I'm hooked. Damn fine writing.

I'm an exacting critic

I liked most of this story - by which I mean that I actively enjoyed the content, rather than stuck with it during writing between enjoyable scenes. Great concept and good execution.

Powned it

I am not used to reading a good gaming flow, and a good story all at once. I am really glad there are more chapters to read! Keep it up! /Cough...

Awesome!

At first, I never thought the story will go like this. The 'twist' make it even more exciting! I love it! ♥

I really suck at Diablo

But this story was a fun read. Thanks for sharing.

NT

Excellent!

The Gamer Goddess is my favorite series on Lit. Love the characters and it tells an awesome story.

great story

i usually come here looking for a different type of story, but i gave it a go and was very pleasantly surprised. surprised enough to make my first comment. i really liked this story, all 3 parts. i think i preferred the first 2 parts but i still rate the 3rd part 4 out of 5.
great writing. thanks for the story

Woooooos

Ok like everyone else I came here looking for something I could get hard and fantazise about...but...wooow; just woow. I was pulled in from the first word and that's something rare to find on this site. There are some others but not all of them can pull me and hold me to every word, every interaction like your story here. In fact i think i found a new favorite writer on here. I'd like to say thank you for sharing this!! Now pardon me while I stall getting ready for work by finding and starting chapter 2
-ShadowSaber

Gamer loving the Gaming Story

I game myself though i play different types of games - COD Ghosts is my current favourite. I live in UK and I use the XBOX360 to talk to my sons online from Ireland where they live. So it is a different kind of experience. I am also a much older gamer (58) I read and read and totally enjoyed your story, Sheri seems gorgeous, delicate, and obviously fragile and the main character likewise.
What I liked most was the reality of the story, these could be two very real people
Thank you, good story I totally enjoyed

Wow

I've read many of your stories and enjoyed them all. This one struck a chord that I didn't know I had. Exceptional. Thank you.

I'm not a gamer

But I'm very glad I gave this a shot. Excellent writing, good compelling storyline. Best writing I've seen here yet. I'm an avid reader and this really is as good as most and better than some print books I've read. If the rest of the series is this good you've got a new fan.

Very nice story, or at least the start of one. The characters and their backgrounds are very solid and believable (well, for porn anyway, lol). I've never played Diablo 3. I was going to buy it on release but then I started reading about all the problems they had at the start and I was turned off and I never got around to it in the end. You've inspired me to give it a go, I imagine it's available on budget release now :)

If I had to suggest one area for improvement (which I always try to do) it would be that the narrative through the first half of the story is a bit wooden. Just lots of details about Diablo then some dialogue between the two protagonists. It would have liked to know a bit more about what Steve was thinking as their relationship developed. Maybe have a scene where he was somewhere other than at his PC. I understand that you wanted to keep both their backgrounds murky for a while, which is fine, but it was quite hard work to be interested in his character because nothing was really offered for four pages.

Anyway, that one small thing aside, great work. :)

Warning: beginning is hardwork , but this story will be a Classic , so stick with it

the game chat is a bit hard to get to grips with.
(and i am a gamer used to that style of chat)
it's only @ page 2 or 3 that as a reader you start to appreciate the foundations for the story that the earlier pages provide .
by the time you finish the chapter , its obvious the story could/would not work without it

the Author has created something very,very special here . one of the most captivating storys on Literotica ,

it's one of those storys that could easy be published
if it was fleshed out / extended .
as is , it's on my all time top5 of storys i have seen here.

Writing is good.

Writing is skillful, but find that the writer is a typical male chauvinistic egoist. In his stories the character is allowed to screw his wife's girlfriend in front of her, but the girlfriend not allowed the same with other guys.

Thank you.

That was awesome. I have only read this chapter so far but that was great! As a nerd and big gamer the story touch a little fetish of mine but the way you write I simply adore.

Thank you.

Well done

As a gamer, and something of a writer myself, I have to say this is one of your best pieces. Very well done, for whatever value one person's opinion has. :)

have you been listening in?

I can't believe how close to RL this story is and now I'm embarrassed that I've said this..........you were listening to my skype, weren't you?

skull-nation23

First ,you had my curiosity… but now you have my attention. Keep up the good work

One of the best

That is one of the best stories, I have read on literotica. So well written. A lot of people could learn from your writing style.

Thank you

This is a fantastic piece of writing, I have read well over a thousand pieces
of fiction on this site and can and will happily state that this is a fantastic tale
so far. I will comment further after I have read the next chapter.
Only story I have ever commented on or rated, which should tell
you much I rate it.

Still the story I come back to

I have read hundreds of stories over the past few years and this is still the one that I think about when I ponder the best stories of literotica. Thank you for this.

Sorry it's taken me so long to find this. It's really good. Now I've got to read the rest.

Great story.

Really enjoying this story. Much better than your cabin story, no offense. I actually know people like this in rl, and the story is well written.

Fun story, with several twists!

I love this author's work, and finally worked my way through his many tales until I got to this one. I love the gamer twist and the 'damaged goods' tangent as well. He really knows how to spin a yarn, as well as get down and dirty with the sex. The best stories, like this one (I'm sure) will have the best of each. Keep on writing Sir!

A fine tall tale.

I'm not a game player (I never had enough quarters, asteroids, pacman.) The gamers language not a problem. A good story will always be a joy to read. I started reading on my tv, moved to the tablet, I'm trying to keep up with tech, think this story will help.

Amazing

Very well written. I'm what you call the "neckbeard". Haha... Except, I have my own place, don't live with mom. lol

Diablo III

Hardcore characters are mortal so you can't resurrected him when he dies!

Pretty sure ur a noob with decent research

Hardcore characters cannot come back to life, your account is deleted and all progress as well as real money spent is lost. Not sure about this game but in runescape, irons and hardcore irons cant trade anything except bonds

Well Shit, Nice job

I was literally going through the entire database here to find some shit story I saw a while back, when I came across this. A much better find to be sure, making that effort worth it. Please keep it up matey, not enough good stories like this as far as I'm concerned, real quality.

I liked it just fine.

Take it easy on the noobs. We all had to start someplace. ;-)

Sign me Horsa -- CB138, Total Levels 2666 and still climbing.

Great

I've read a few stories on here over the years, but so far this is my favorite. I really enjoy how down to earth and slightly geeky it is, resonates with me. Very good read so far, moving on to chapter two!