All Comments on 'Metamorphosis 01'

by defiant_1

Sort by:
  • 8 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wow

WOW !! Nice to see a well written story of male being dominated, a refreshing change, can't wait for the next installments

femmedfemmedabout 11 years ago
Nice start!

Great start! I'm a huge fan of the build-up and story of a man being trapped (however willingly), and this is nicely done. Also glad to see you're writing again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great work! I've always been a fan.

Welcome back, I look forward to the next installments.

with much anticipation. What floats your boat obviously

floats mine. You paint delicous pictures with words that

leave me wanting more.

With all sincerity,5F4C Karmadarma.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

When will the next part be out?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
No I want to leave you - now!

Because if you want a puppy, buy one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Next?

I really like this story!!! I hope you write the next chapter soon!!! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What he said?

Was that he was filing a complaint with both the Company and the Police. That she had better get a lawyer as he would be seeing to it that she went to jail for a long, long, long time. What a stupid bitch. What a stupid, unbelievable story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

i like it very much. pls continue...

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous