Massage Mat Ch. 01

A very nice start

It seems as if she is a woman in need of a man, and I hope that her son fills that need perfectly.

Well written and very erotic.

Thanks for the good read.

This might go somewhere, it's too early to tell yet. I'd like to read some more before passing judgement though.

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I DO NOT SEE WHERE THE INCEST PART OF THE STORIES DESCRIPTION IS .

No incest but HOLY SH*$ WoW!

Great writing style - love the build up - MORE NOW PLEASE!

Ok so no incest - but I think it's a matter of when as she will be caught by her son,
Keep an eye on ages and time framing please author, but great imagination and can't wait for more!!

Must be a published author - if not - Why Not!?!

No incest !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But there could be, when her son Jason gets home. He sees her on the mat,and shes still thinking of Dan. All hell could break loose. PLEASE keep this story going. It's not bad for your first try. ......... ........LAROC OF AGES

Lay and lie

Please learn those words. The mat does not lay on the bed.

Another teaser

Hate these short, short ,short teasers. Will not be looking for pt.2.

Interesting beginning!

You write well and I'm sure you'll better with time. Take the brickbats being thrown at you with a grain of salt. Very descriptive and erotic and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Like others, I'd like more in one sitting, but every good writer brings it as the muse allows. Bravo!

very poetic

I agree with Ahabscribe: to hell with the small-minded naysayers! Keep going, enjoy yourself and let it flow. You're good, and I'd like to know more about you as you fill out your profile and submit the next chapters.

More please...

That was a beautiful mix of clever and sexy. I only wish it did not end so abruptly. I am anxiously waiting for part two. Thanks!

loved it

Keep up the great work Android keep em coming.

Yep, good one.

Please keep going. Develop it more and thanks .

Mat

I don't know who is having a problem with your story, but it's damn good. And with a little more, one could do some serious jacking off! Oh, right, on to chapter 2!

thanks for the lovely story.

Very good

The ending was interesting. Very original. ;)

GREAT!

Great development! It felt like 19th Century/early 20th Century: a time before the wheels fell off everything!