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by TheOnly_1_4u04/02/13

WTF

I normally do not slam a story, but this story is terrible..
This story is not erotica, it has the feel of porn. There is no story line.
Mark feels the touch of a woman for the first time in years... why?
Ilona makes noises of pleasure ... who the heck is this chick? I thought the story was about Mark and HELEN

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