All Comments on 'Something Unexpected Ch. 06'

Very well written and clearly we want to know what happens next.

LOL , that was classic . Always worth the wait baby

Nice story but the Spanish not so much...st that you ask someone that speaks Spanish for help because google translator doesn't always translate it correctly. For example when you put "La Bellza" it translates to the beauty; for the part where it says "beautiful one" it would've fit better to just put "Hermosa" because it just doesn't make sense the way it's put. Another one was "dearest" which is "queridisima" not querida, among other words. It makes me feel like the character doesn't speak any Spanish at all, it just makes it look fake. IMO

I'm sure it would have better flow if you ask Spanish speakers for help. It would be better rather than using google translator at least for me. But keep up the good work.

This is a great story. Hope you write more soon!

Would love it if you could find time to tell us what happens next.... Talk about a cliffhanger.

That probably wasn't the best way for Mom to find out.

Lesbian, Sundari.

Ok successful reconnecting the four girls - done ✅ ….. getting used to each other - done ✅ …… being careful hiding in the shower stall or in the restroom for sexual encounters - done ✅ ….. moving to the next location - done ✅ SURPRISE ….. being 21 and exposing your bare behind including a naked girlfriend to your mother, uh that might be not a perfect path to explain your situation ….. funny chapter just for the readers 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨💋