All Comments on 'Jessica Rabbit Does Hentai'

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pentheswordpentheswordabout 11 years ago

Boobie-girl? really? Still, it was a pretty hot story.

muhabbamuhabbaabout 11 years agoAuthor

I was going for the old Hentai from the early 1990's. It wasn't always the best written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just one nitpick:

I think it would be better if you'd saved your opening paragraphs (the ones about toons losing their jobs, etc.) for after your it-was-all-just-a-movie revelation. IMHO it would have made for a better plot twist. Just offering an opinion.

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