by hevndwlr
Another hot, but rather short story from this author with a real surprise at the end.
Again, author, nicely done. a hot and sexy story abet a bit short to get the really good scores on here. Your first story was about 900 words and a single Literotica page is about 3.600 words. I think this one is shorter but with a little time and effort you could have combined the two parts into a single page expanded it some and come up with a full or nearly full page and perhaps received better scores.
Again despite what I've said I gave you five stars for a hot sexy story.
Oh yeah, please keep writing.
Mike