All Comments on 'My Best Friend'

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Scurvydog44035Scurvydog44035about 11 years ago
Nice little Story

I liked the short story. I could of used a little more background. Stories about them growing up. Alos please re-read your story and not rely entirley on Spell check. You used Herd a few times when you should of used Heard.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
yay

i have a best friend im a virgin i want him to fuck me and creampie

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
EDIT

DECENT STORY, BUT YOU NEED SOME SERIOUS EDITING!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Spell check

Simply running a spell check would improve this considerably.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loses (correct spelling) her virtue?! 1* nonsense.

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