by Shaeshaeb
I liked the short story. I could of used a little more background. Stories about them growing up. Alos please re-read your story and not rely entirley on Spell check. You used Herd a few times when you should of used Heard.
i have a best friend im a virgin i want him to fuck me and creampie
DECENT STORY, BUT YOU NEED SOME SERIOUS EDITING!
Simply running a spell check would improve this considerably.
Loses (correct spelling) her virtue?! 1* nonsense.