Winter Passion Ch. 01

most would comment on...

her being a spitfire... but ill be damned if this CHAPTER isnt a spitfire itself!

a wee bit short, but good, I just hope the intermissions arent months/years long or never get completed like some great starts here on LR and elsewhere :(


TA~

:D

I can't wait to read the next chapter

I feel for Niri but she judged Xander, her friend, it bit too harsh. She didn't even let him explain himself. Once she thinks about her actions she should apologize to Xander. He probably had a good reason for not telling her exactly who he is.

Awesome beginning. Can't wait to see what comes next. Was a bit short but very interesting. Please continue

good story so far but why is it labeled with an "H"?

Wow

Amazing read so far

Amazing

There are few good stories with dragons in them on this sight that I have found but you just stole my breath and I want more. :D I can just see the drama that could unfold between her and Xander. I can't wait. And I love that she gets to care for the baby dragons.

too short

I wish it was longer. I love it so far, I hope it won't take long for more.....

Great!

Its Great so far! Can't wait to read more! Hope it won't take too long...:)

:)

Looking forward to more.