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My Brother's Love

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by Anonymous

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by rosspal01/18/13

Great Story

I hope you continue this. It's a really good story line and you tell it well.5+

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by Anonymous01/18/13

not good

way to rushed no background and an unrealistic rush to sex. wheres the character build up? wheres the plot build up? wheres the end?

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by Paul_Chance01/19/13

Very Good

I found it well written and erotic - a good job of building the anticipation and it had a nice narrative flow.

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by Anonymous02/09/13

Good story .

I don't know how I missed this story .I liked it a lot. I would love to read more.

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by Anonymous06/10/13

fraternity girls?

men belong to a fraternity; women belong to sororities. if you're going to write with college situations, at least know the language.

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by Anonymous06/19/13

Great story. More to come?

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by lexx105705/12/15

I love this please continue❤

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by Anonymous01/12/16

anonymous

That stupid and false statement about black people looking alike was uncalled for

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