this is not really erotic at all! This is a rather sick fantasy! I hope to god that it is just fantasy and there is not actually a mother out there who acts this way! What kind of mother would want to dress her daughters up like whores and turn them into slave? Have to be really sick and fucked in the head!!!
I thought I'd see if the comments from Chapter 2 had sunk in. But it looks like you're still "out there." "WAY out there."
Chapter two took a wrong turn. This chapter compounded your poor choices and poor writing. I'm checking out on this series. In fact, I'm checking out on anything with your name on it.
Buh-bie.
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Anonymous01/29/13
Awesome
ignore the haters. These are awesome stories, keep on writing them!!
Ignore the moaners. It's a great story. More, please.....
by
Anonymous07/12/13
mum, ?
Why do so many sentences start with "mum, " for no apparent reason?
by
Anonymous11/29/13
Anonymous
This is disgusting
Who the hell eats shit
God u have such a dirty mind but I did enjoy this story I am so wet right u stupid horny disgusting shit eating bitch
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Anonymous10/05/14
Meh
I'm not sure why you keep using "Mum" (do you mean mmm, perhaps?) but it's really annoying and the improper usage drags you out of the story.
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Anonymous11/08/14
pantiless-is-best
"No, Jessica. The whole idea of a skirt is to be bare underneath; to feel the air; to get all hot thinking about being open. And no bra, either."
English
I'm sorry.....
this is not really erotic at all! This is a rather sick fantasy! I hope to god that it is just fantasy and there is not actually a mother out there who acts this way! What kind of mother would want to dress her daughters up like whores and turn them into slave? Have to be really sick and fucked in the head!!!
I thought I'd see if the comments from Chapter 2 had sunk in. But it looks like you're still "out there." "WAY out there."
Chapter two took a wrong turn. This chapter compounded your poor choices and poor writing. I'm checking out on this series. In fact, I'm checking out on anything with your name on it.
Buh-bie.
Awesome
ignore the haters. These are awesome stories, keep on writing them!!
wtf
Disgusting... Enemas? Piss drinking?
Ignore the moaners. It's a great story. More, please.....
mum, ?
Why do so many sentences start with "mum, " for no apparent reason?
Anonymous
This is disgusting
Who the hell eats shit
God u have such a dirty mind but I did enjoy this story I am so wet right u stupid horny disgusting shit eating bitch
Meh
I'm not sure why you keep using "Mum" (do you mean mmm, perhaps?) but it's really annoying and the improper usage drags you out of the story.
pantiless-is-best
"No, Jessica. The whole idea of a skirt is to be bare underneath; to feel the air; to get all hot thinking about being open. And no bra, either."
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