All Comments on 'Teaching My Daughter to Please Ch. 03'

by One_Two_Nine

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I'm sorry.....

this is not really erotic at all! This is a rather sick fantasy! I hope to god that it is just fantasy and there is not actually a mother out there who acts this way! What kind of mother would want to dress her daughters up like whores and turn them into slave? Have to be really sick and fucked in the head!!!

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesabout 11 years ago
I thought I'd see if the comments from Chapter 2 had sunk in. But it looks like you're still "out there." "WAY out there."

Chapter two took a wrong turn. This chapter compounded your poor choices and poor writing. I'm checking out on this series. In fact, I'm checking out on anything with your name on it.

Buh-bie.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome

ignore the haters. These are awesome stories, keep on writing them!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wtf

Disgusting... Enemas? Piss drinking?

Mikey48Mikey48almost 11 years ago

Ignore the moaners. It's a great story. More, please.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
mum, ?

Why do so many sentences start with "mum, " for no apparent reason?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Anonymous

This is disgusting

Who the hell eats shit

God u have such a dirty mind but I did enjoy this story I am so wet right u stupid horny disgusting shit eating bitch

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Meh

I'm not sure why you keep using "Mum" (do you mean mmm, perhaps?) but it's really annoying and the improper usage drags you out of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
pantiless-is-best

"No, Jessica. The whole idea of a skirt is to be bare underneath; to feel the air; to get all hot thinking about being open. And no bra, either."

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