All Comments on 'Not My Problem Anymore'

It's gold quality as is, although I would LOVE to see the implementation and fulfillment of said plan. All one can do is rub eyes & thank Britease for this dazzling flash story.

Excellent little flash story. Well done!

of British Civility......

I used to (never) give five star ratings for flash tales. Oh, well! Never say "never!"

All we needed was one more page: To get Heather's reaction. But oh well, this will do.

OH YEAH

Haha! Nice.

That one caught a good laugh and a very rare 5, even as short as it was. Goes to prove, never mess with mates.

wow that was bad

It's nice to have a good chuckle every now and then. Hope you write more.

Hum...

Kinda like it - while I don't do "bros before hos" I think this one is well done.

lots of interesting possibilities - the plotting between the guys of the divorce, the possibilties of the "messing with her head", the lack of annoying ownership issues... the ickiness of "creampies"...

Of course, it is fairly dry and narrowly focused on the male side, and so the folks who ache for drama go without. Hum... perhaps a bit more humor in this?

Anyway, good to see a new submission from you -

Green-something

but still better than most.

Ending was stretched but it was acceptable.

The boys did not want to be blindsided!

For the read.

Would have liked more, but a fun read nonetheless. Thanks.

Could you have taken it much deeper? Of course. You've an imagination and talent. I hope you find the time to do so again.

Glad to see you are back to your old self. 5

way too short no background. no real ending.. took you what 5 mins to slap this together?

That is all.

it did. amuse. glad to be able to read another of your tales. thanks

Nicely done.

Short and to the point, but complete story

Thanks for the good read.

Just a bit too short.

short, sweet and too the point-nice story

But he's lonely. You chould introduce him to a couple other scenes and maybe make a story.

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Would have liked the penciling to be a bit longer.

Thx!

I liked it. Made the points it needed to make and the story ended proper. Thanks.

Strong humorous story where the adulteress gets her comeuppance in a wonderful manner. 5*

Having now read several of your stories I've noticed a disturbing tendency for you to leave your stories unfinished. Whether you think that this is a clever way to end things or you can't seem to think of clever endings for your stories, I'd just like to register my displeasure. For what it's worth - which ain't much. Bloody Yanks......

A short story can be TOO short.

Not here, pretty much said it all.

It might have been nice to see them set Heather up and push over, though!

Late in, early out, minimum of characters and plenty of dialogue. Well done! Good flash is not easy to write and the "too short" set should more appreciate the skill getting the tale told.*****

Norm

trying to hold all that greed never works. TK U MLJ LV NV

Nice twist to an old theme.

Well done.

Bravo. Would like to here how she reacted when she got dumped though.

not much meat on the bone but what there is was tasty. Finally a four. Not enough meat for a five but at least it wasn't a one.

That Pommy humour. So beautifully understated. 5*

... neither of them went "Tally ho, old chap!"

:)

It’s a really interesting spin on BTB. The only part that didn’t work for me, is how easily Nick and Tom got along, no anguish, no malice toward each other. Sure Heather lied, but I’d still expect Tom to be more angry.

Love the twist.... to bad we all didn't get a chance for the finaly of the p.s. to the cheating twat!

Very good plot.

Would've got my top ratings,

hadn't it been a flash story.

4 out of 5 from me.

Cute little story. A real fun read.

Those damn Brits are so terribly civil ain't they though?

This is definitely your worst one yet. Absolute tosh.

CHUCK

...he keeps sleeping with the cheater and risking getting her pregnant. No means of birth control is 100% guaranteed and he could be tied to that cheating bitch for decades. No, too risky. Good story, though.

This author goes from writing well developed stories to this tripe

Good friends burn a cheating bitch. I would have enjoyed a little of Heather’s reaction to the sting.

Second read.

Sod it, if it's just a flash story.

I really like this one.

I'm adding a star up to top ratings from me!

Brilliant story but I dearly wish it could have been a little bit longer. Just long enough to tell us about the shit show the slut wife's life became.

I would have enjoyed it more if you played with her mind more!

Great premise and I enjoyed it, just wasn't long enough. I rarely say that!

4 stars thank you

"You could stop fucking her."

Boom! One of the great lines in Lit!

Real good. Wonderful twist

[17.06.23]

Crackin' tale!

11/10!!!!!

Loved it. Keep writing, bud. If I say, mate, I'll get told about it. But you understand. The bear definitely approves.5 stars.

The BEAR

cute little story! but i would have loved to hear more about the revenge on heather and how it all went down.

Finally a story that encompasses the FACT that it is the cheating whore wife who is to blame, however the paramour may not be blameless sure it takes two to tango and all that, but the majority of the blame is due the wife, she broke her vow to you, she betrayed you lied, deceived, along with the insult and humiliation she's dumped on you. More stories dishing consequences out upon those that truly deserve them. Way too many stories on this site excuse or admonish their disgusting behavior rather than hold them accountable.

This was a good story.

Cute story, quick read. Thanks for your writing.