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loved it
cant wait to read it again
more please
omy best peeing story i'ver read in years hope theres a part 2 asap thanks
Good stuff.
Do continue.
Fantastic story
Fantastic story. Well done.
Oh my....
I need more of this......
excellent !!
so well written !!
Very well told!
Thoroughly enjoyed reading that. Will there be a follow up?
Look forward to the Kinky Kontinuation.
Great story but...
U should do one about in da office like sneak off 2 the lift, supply closet or ur office or something don't u think...
Great Story!
Really enjoyed this story.
The thought of a girl dying to pee in a lift is great but the story is so much better by having another girl there to witness her desperation.
I love the bit where she pees all over her friend and imagines it soaking through her blouse!
Loved it
I loved it, Luna. Thanks. Looking forward to the next chapter.
awesome
great twist as the end. very hot piss story. well done.
More!!
There needs to be additional chapters for this story line, please? :-)
Thank you for the lovely comments
This story is part of Dripping Wet, as is the sequel "Going in the garden." Visit lunaswift.com to find out more about me and my books.
Good Story
Good story & well written.
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