Is there a next chapter?
plz, write next chapter soon!
and don't forget to continue Deputy MILF story
This chapter was great, I didnt quite like ch1 because the way Duncan got Janelle. I mean, who lets her son's friend sleep with her because he has nightmares? He is a man not a boy, and letting masturbate in her bed? come on. Anyways, the story was quite exciting and it got better in chapter 2.
For those asking, it is clear there will be a chapter 3. Just wait patiently for it.
Overall good chapter but some of the magic from the first chapter kind of disappeared. The best part of the earlier entry was the fact Duncan was slowly seducing Leonard's Mom. This chapter it was like wham bam they are a couple. Would have been nice if they did a little more sneaking around and Leonard ends up spying on them. I know there was some of that in this entry just not has hot as before. Not sure where you are going with the new characters but please don't get things too complicated. Maybe Duncan could force one of his friends on Mrs. Campbell or even have her seduced by more of Leonard's friends. SA2222 does these kinds of stories to perfection. Always having the son end up watching his Mother getting used.
Keep up the great work and would love you taking another crack at Deputy MILF. Thank you for the time and effort.
PLEASE HAVE DUNCAN WIN IN THE END! Have him completely win over Leonard's mom and impregnate her.
Hope to see more soon. When is your time frame for the next chapter?
Should only be a couple weeks until chapter three is ready.
I would love to see Duncan catch Leonard and Chelsea together.
As long as the Author end the story in a way that it feels like an ending.
To date none of his stories has that feeling. I wish he would complete the story.
Its laughable he would refer to to sa2222 Home Run story and his other story. Those stories to date remain incomplete.
In Home Run, it leaves of with the young friend asking his bud's mom if he can see her again - she answers I shouldn't but we'll see. Hence the feeling of incompleteness.
In Deputy Milf & the Town Bully, it end with the bully's exgirlfriend agreeing to help the son get his Mom away from the bully. It actually is in incest which I took it to mean she son, with the ex's help, seduce his mom away from the bully. But that story was never written.
And now we are to this story which clearly is screaming for a third chapter yet I have the feeling this author will drop this story for another one and never finish it.
Sorry for the rant but am sick of reading fine stories only for them to never be concluded.
Come on buddy, part 3 on the way I hope.
very anticipated to read Ch.3 !!
You have a lot of anxious followers out here. Any update on timing of next chapter?
...chapter 03 next week! Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Thanx remnick13, the update is very much appreciated.
it's week end already :(
I have never seem so many people anxious for read your follow on story. You have really touched on something very erotic here. Please do not disappoint. Any update on timing.
Just wanted to thank you for the excellent story, there's not a whole lot of stories with this kind of premise but this is one of the better ones ive read :) Can't wait for the next one, take your time tho !
This isn't just great erotica, it's great storytelling. Leonard's torment is palpable, and I can't help but fell some sympathetic pain. Janelle's descent into total depravity is both heartbreaking and crotch-warming.
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