All Comments on 'The Fall of Wrath Ch. 02'

I like the story and want to see where you're going with it. Your chapters are kind of short. Maybe longer chapters would give you more room to develop your characters a little further. I liked to read more. Thanks for posting your story.

Please share your updating plans. You're off to a good strong start.

This is more of a hobby for me and I can never guarantee that I can put new chapters out on a schedule. As of right now I am almost done with chapter three. I have a blog that I immediately publish the chapters and I use literotica for more of a target viewership. On my blog as well are some art pieces I commissioned too. I am not sure if I am allowed to share my blog link via literotica, but email me and I will share it!

Dee Dagger