All Comments on 'A Weekend with Sandy'

Without going into great background detail it told the story nicely. Good first try. Please keep on writing. This site needs new blood.Seems like the wimp cuckolds are dominating lately. Nice to have something light to read. Thanks.

If you leave it at this, your other readers won't be as satisfied as the anonymous first commenter. After all, your title DOES include the word "weekend", and this is just the first afternoon. And I don't think anyone will buy a weekend where the man does nothing but give the woman orgasms. He's got to get his, or it's not "true".

Still, this is a nice tease, an interesting prologue to what has the potential to be a good story. Hopefully you'll add some more.

(By the way, I KNOW you didn't mean 10C for a bra size -- unless Aussie ladies wear uses different sizes than other places.)

Thanks for the feedback so far. Yes it is just a teaser and should really continue :) The hard part seems to discipline oneself to sit down and put the time aside to write!

And yes 10C is an Aussie bra size :)

I learn something new every day! :)