by Purplicious613
She might as well give in to the poor guy because she won't be able to shake him. I wonder how her stubborn behind will react when they go out to eat with Julian there.
i really like this story . but i hate how long it takes for u to get each chapter up . it would be nice if they were longer also but u r a great writer keep it up. if u want people to read ur work u need to post faster .
This story has good flow and interesting characters. Please keep this story moving forward with more chapters. You have talent; and we the readers would like to see more chapters with less time between postings.
The story flow is good but I think we are still missing more background on the tattoo. I mean why is she fighting being with him, why will it change her life for what I can only perceive as she thinks for the worse. I do agree you should keep writing I want to read more. But also hold the stance that waiting so long between post really is hard for a reader to stay interested especially cause the post are so short. If you are going to take so long to post try to make them longer 3-5 lit pages. Keep of the good work.
I notice you only write every now amd then please keep writing the story.
WONDERFUL story. All stars, please don't let this go unfinished.