All Comments on 'If You Love Me (Let Me Go)'

this is a fabulous intro, and a wonderful take on the tale. Looking forward to the (hopefully somewhat more explisit) later chapters! Please keep up the great work!

I like the set-up. It could use more emotion and greater details, but that's nitpicking. I already love this story and you do tell it very well. I hope you have longer and many more chapters.

This is incredible please please please continue further with the story

Looking forward to more. Really enjoyed!

Very good. Nice take on an old tale.

I didn't have use to my laptop this week until now so I will be starting on chapter 2 this week and have it posted by Friday.

five stars

You're off to a great start! :) Please continue the story! Don't leave us hanging! I've been checking everyday hoping for ch 2 of this story. :)

I can't wait for chapter 2

love it give us more

Fantastic job!

Nice P!ATD ref on the title.