All Comments on 'New Family Ties Ch. 04'

by Arielu

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ariesgirlariesgirlover 11 years ago

What a tease...that was too short. You can't leave us hanging with more twists added to the family drama. I can't wait till Raina gets a hold of her crazy stepdaughter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Oh my goodness!!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! I love where this is going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I love it

Evil kids = evil payback lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
okay, what's next?

The suspense is too much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Please continue

I read this last night. I Like THIS very much you need to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
good job

This story really really really needs to continue

blastwizardblastwizardabout 10 years ago
This story..., I feel a Morris Day quote coming.... Lol

"Let's have some ACTION! Let's have some asses wigglin'... I want some PERFECTION!" HA!! Perfection is Queen Raina and those fools asses are gonna be wigglin'. Queen Raina is a Dom because being submissive in this group is the fastest way to lose your mind. This should be interesting. I feel a rap quote coming on. Lol. Raina is the "Baddest Bitch" - these fools are gonna bow down. (Oh wait - that was Ice Cube) You know it's late when movie quotes and songs from the 80's & 90's are pinging to literotica stories :-0). Drop a new chapter when you can.

LadyBug19LadyBug19about 10 years ago

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Yass

Keep it going im hooked

erebustitan43erebustitan43over 4 years ago
Great turn of events

Where are the follow up stories?

ArieluArieluover 4 years agoAuthor
Hey Guys

Thanks for your kind words.

Met a new someone, who inspired me to write, and like the story.. He twisted my heart and now i have new material to add

Aint life a bitch. Will post up soon.

Thanks.so much for your comments and Likes

Rin_MoonRin_Moon11 months ago

No, why did you stop posting this story. I wanna see Raina beat both the stepdaughter and stepson's asses.

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