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Now I Lay Her Down to Sleep Ch. 04

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by Anonymous07/04/13

It was a great story

I thought the ending was really goo and was what I was hoping for! So thanks for the great read!!

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by storytyme07/27/13

Thank you for the nice comment.

I am glad you enjoyed the stories. I enjoy hearing back from my critics whether good or bad.

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by Anonymous03/19/14

Loved the ending

Glad to read they did finally get together and are celebrating five years. You're a good writer.

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