I have read all of your stories and, for me, this is the best. A little more romance than your others.
Thanks for putting it out there for us!
I cant think of another word. Perfect. I have a close set of friends that served with me in the millitary. We dont have to talk about it but we know that there is nothing we have not or will not do for the other. Its hard on wives being on the outside of that but a couple of us have been lucky to find our "Sheri's" they make the lives we have had worth living.
Next time though make it WoW :P
Awesome story, another fav. Keep up the good work!!
I guess the idea of taking justice into your own hands can be satisfying on some level, but... torture and killing... You've watched too many modern movies.
I gave 5 stars to ch 1&2, but can't decide between 2/3 for this, since the characters became disgusting and unbelievable.
A story good enough it holds it's own and keeps my attention even if the explicit parts weren't included. shame on you for making so many other "authors" on here look bad lol. Great story and I look forward to others if you keep on going here. Either way thank you for this, I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Thanks for sharing.
... But... I don't know, the violence was a bit much, I guess. I mean, I'm okay with the full spectrum of violence and gore, it doesn't really phase me,and I know that it was all in the name of justice, but it just shifted a little quickly from happy-lovey-sexy to evil-murder-torture-death. Seemed a bit uncontrolled, and to be honest I thought it didn't really fit in with the style of the story so far... The fight in Ch. 2 did, but not the open brutality here. Just my thoughts ;)
Still, absolutely love the series as a whole, and it definitely ended it on an astounding high. You have created a cast of beautifully intricate characters, a riveting and compelling plot, and superbly written sex scenes (as always ;] ). Congratulations on creating a masterpiece, and thank you for sharing it with us all ;D
The best. The writing and plot line kept me coming back for more
Wicked, awesome, awe inspiring, best ever tale ive read on the net! THanks!
This was the " Taking Care of Business " phase of the story, on multiple levels. I'm unsure exactly on which catagory to begin to congratulate the author. The diciest área was the boudoir with cousin Sandy becoming a player. At first I was annoyed because she seemed like a superfluous frill to the main couple's relationship.
Then I saw how she was being used as a erotic crash test dummy. Sandy would try anything ostensibly perilous first. It reminded me if a zoo keepers account of trying to keep a pair of bear roomates from engaging in neurotic behavior by issuing fresh challenges like frozen clumps of blueberries bobbing in water or piles of woodchips.
One of the bears though fascinated would always hang back from the novelties until it's more adventurous buddy would show it was safe. For obvious reasons that reminded me of Sheri. The 3 some that seemed gratuitous was literally sexual healing. Brilliant !
In the interests of brevity, I'll say I didn't relish the violence but saw it's motivation. The body count rising right near the end was akin to the Godfather epics. ' Brutal but bona-fide' is best expression that comes to mind. This story is a dead cinch for a hot rating.
It's honestly remarkable how Tx Tall Tales hopscotches from genre to genre in his stories as easily as Tarzan swings from vine to vine in those Johnny Weismuller movies. Full marks !
I've lurked for years, but this is the first story that moved me to actually comment. Well done, bravo.
Liked the story. Nice plot, probably could have left out the part of killing the low lifes. Overall it was one that kept you coming back for more.
Best story I have read on here. Have never commented before, but this deserves it.
Won't be reading this, they're too busy gaming.
My first post as well, thoroughly loved the story (maybe the end was a little grizzly) and couldn't stop thinking about it all day. Thank you so much!
You might be surprised
While I don't know a lot of guys who would go that route, I do know a couple who just might, give the opportunity
Not gamer dudes, ex-military, but still ...
Erotic writing isn't supposed to give me feels I think, but again, you're writing is so fucking amazing, it's actually getting me the urge to write again.
I think it helps that this does make me think about a few happenings I've had in my life, and having the urge to go out on a few dregs.
Another awesome story, well written, great plot, great sex! You are one of the very best writers around. Thank you so much for writing.
Most stories that I read and enjoy are quickly moved to the other end of short-term memory. Some stick with me for a little while and I enjoy remembering small segments. Only a few stories that I read affect how I feel the next day... and this is one of them (all three chapters). The story feels so real; the details so well articulated... meeting people like AceHole and Cherrybomb would be very interesting.
Please write some more!! Thanks!
This whole series has been amazing! Great story, great people and great sex! So gutted that it has to finish!
can you please say when a story ends with torture and revenge killings!
fuck fuck fuck that is horrible
I understand how some might think it's justified but i still find it fundamentally abhorrent. and by god if you wanted to kill them why in hell did you have to torture them first. this story just went from a five to a one for me. holy fucking shit i didn't want to stumble on to than while masturbating! fuck!
Simply an amazing story! I feel like I am Steve, except that I play WoW instead of D3. I will remember this story as long as I play computer games! My new goal in life is to find my own gamer goddess.
Every once in a while you stumble into a story that isn't just about sex. This story takes you and an emotional ride that builds up desire. Like Steve were are all anxious to see more and experience more of Sheri. Then she takes our heart with her background and her display of courage and tenderness. But then we are hit with her wild and untamed side and are exposed to a set of thrilling sexual encounters.
I admit I was a bit shocked about the revenge plot within the story. It wasn't enough to turn me off, but I felt that it was just extremely abrupt. It could be argued that violence, especially emotional offset, is abrupt and unexpected, and just like the other cast of the character the reader didn't know that Steve and his friends had planned this.
Even so I enjoyed the full spectrum of the story. I felt hot and steamy sex, I felt sad and worried for Sheri, the warmth of the friendship. I even felt the satisfaction of taking revenge and the assurance that no one would harm Sheri again. In the end any story capable of conveying emotion to the reader is a masterpiece. Well done.
this was a very good "tall tale" until then.
The first two chapters terrific, the ending, phenomenal!
Unlike the detractors, I personally know two rape victims, and I wish I had the resources to do what Steve and company did. Sure it may have seemed harsh to some, but until you've witnessed the destruction it causes to someone you love, you just don't understand.
Oh, and to Anon who said...
Won't be reading this, they're too busy gaming.
Read the stories in one day, and leveled up my Ranger 4 levels. Touche!
As Anonymous said -
I managed to play four characters to end-game softcore, and one to the finish in hard-core. I only stopped when the game got into all the Paragon leveling, and then when the economy went to hell.
Still had enough time to write the Lap Mom Series, the Last Boy Scout, Poolboy Benenfits, and M&M Kisses during that time... That, raise a teenage girl, and hold down an executive position in a software biz.
Mature Gamers can do more than game. Just saying. (I know it was probably meant as a joke, but I needed to poke back a little.)
I may have to do a WoW story, I've played that one a lot more (although not much in the last couple of years, I'd have to polish off my old characters and get up to speed.) I do have an idea that's been percolating away in the back of my grey matter.
As to those who don't like the violence. I understand. There are a lot of people who think that violence is a refuge for the weak. I don't necessarily agree. I believe there's a time for taking things in your own hands, especially when the system fails you. Maybe it's a cultural thing, maybe the ex-military, maybe all the sports. Maybe I just like the feeling of hitting an asshole so hard my hand hurts for weeks, and each time I feel the pain, I get a little satisfaction knowing how much worse he's feeling it. I do take your comments to heart, and I will try, in the future, to make sure that the tags and opening comments provide ample warning when I turn to the darkside in my writing.
Thanks again for all the votes, emails, and great comments. I read them all, even though I don't respond as often as I should. They are greatly appreciated!
Yessir, you're a Texan alright. And an excellent storyteller. Hat's off to you, sir.
I've ever been drawn in to a story this deeply before. many thanks for all your hard work.
That was one hell of a ride, superb stuff. Absolutely brilliant writing!
Really enjoyed this installment. Quite different than anything else you've written. Saw your comment about the Lap Mom series and thought you might be finishing it. Any idea when you might post the conclusion? Reason for asking is looking at your CvN series it has gone on for over 10 years. Long time to wait for a conclusion, in my opinion. Thanks for this story all 5 stars.
Fucking hell TX! You're already my favorite author on Literotica, but you outdid yourself with this one. I know it's a good one when the sex is really just a bonus on top of the story. You brought the characters to life in an engaging way that made them real to me. And for the record, I'm not a gamer at all these days. I played through Diablo 1 and 2 which gave me a little background, but it was absolutely not necessary to enjoy this ride.
After reading this I'm inspired to actually go write that story that's been banging around lazily in my head for so long.
Well, now we know why you didn't categorize this story arc under Romance, after all. Nevertheless, a note at the beginning stating the narrator would, without warning, transition to first-degree serial murder (however justified) would have been helpful for me.
The ending seemed almost hijacked by a ghost author... because the narrative all along was from inside Steve's thoughts, yet there was no indication he was thinking in those directions until suddenly the whole gang's 'getting down to business.'
I'm voting 5s for the first two installments, and think I will simply abstain from voting on the finale rather than drag down the rating due to the shock at the end.
Keep up the writing; I love your stuff!
I've been reading your stories and loved them all. Really hope I will see more from you soon. This story is possibly your best yet, and I can really relate with Steve on many levels, not the whole murder stuff though. Only thing bugging me is 'you're' instead of 'your' in a couple of places.
Damn, typed a long comment and then didn't post I don't think... *sigh*
Anyway, short version - loved it, love to game and really felt for it, loved the voyerism and the web chat (so seriously fucking hot), loved Sheri and could adore a woman like that - a gamer goddess for sure.
Loved that you handled such a detailed story with grace and a horrible topic I detest with consideration and respect.
I hope you do more gaming series, and with quirky characters like M&M kisses and this... so much respect for your writing and the care and craft you put into your characters... but seriously, these girls are way hot, flirty temptresses, and I need more.
Sir this has been a fantastic read and a real true pleasure. That's about I can say except you are now on my short list of favorite authors.
This is definitely the best story I have read anywhere in a long time. And I've only seen this last chapter. The description and development of the characters, their actions, loved it all. Terrific.I don't ever even leave comments, but I had to give you two thumbs up.
this is a fine story, one that grips this reader's interest, introducing a new world and people to care about.
clearly one of the best stories, and writers, on Literotica. In my opinion, you could easily go pro, with or without the sex.
Honestly, this is hands down the best set of stories on this site! You should go pro!
I actually must admit to you good sir, I almost cried at one point. It was quite beautiful. Wouldn't mind an "after story" kind of bit later on, but a nice series nonetheless.
No other words can describe it. Fantastic.
I read all three parts back to back and got off 3 times, that was such an amazing read I wish it was published so I could buy and keep it forever and loan it to my friends. This is the best thing I've reAd in a long time, thank you for that!
Hands down the best story I've read on this site in the years I've been visiting. Keep on writing.
Holy crap, that is single handedly the best indie story on the Internet. Thank you.
I had no idea at first but read all 3 stories back to back. Really enjoyed them!
I really don't comment on these kinds of things, but I had to make an exception. Your stories are so engrossing, and amazingly well crafted, I couldn't stop reading. I didn't think I could find a story that could immerse me so much that after a while I didn't care so much about getting off then about the world you created and the characters. I hope you write more, it would be the shamest of all shames if you didn't. I bookmarked your profile and will keep checking for new stuff with bated breath. Now, time to read even more of your work!
I have to wake up for work in 2 hours. Started reading this series 2-3 hours ago and read right through it, because it was that good of a story. You could honestly be a mainstream writer with your talent. Thanks for sharing.
This series was amazing. It is why I started reading some of your other works. Hands down this story spoke to me more than any other on this site.
Once again an amazing story like an onion with many layers.
I love your work.
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