All Comments on 'Interludes'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
and what now?

OK. Beginning is nice. Definitely. Well written. But something has to happen now. Otherwise, don`t put this story into this category if it has nothing to do with sex or anything. Really.

Bridget69Bridget69almost 6 years ago
Just like foreplay

But where is the satisfying climax?

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