All Comments on 'Boi Toy'

I liked the story. The descriptive writing flowed well and had just enough detail to build a pleasant mental picture. That he was seen in her clothing and not disturbed was delicious.

Thank you, too, for paying attention to your spelling and punctuation. There are other authors that don't take the effort and, though the story they tell might be a good one, the poor writing damages the product.

Please don't leave it like that. Please add a chapter or two!

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You're a good writer, very descriptive, wishing I was there.

Please continue.

Please write more about this adventure.

Very captivating start hoping for a lot of follow through

Oh my such a delicious start to this story line I do hope there is more xxx