All Comments on 'Black Slave Auction Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

why does a white guy have a black dick? why would she go there with no backup?

ariesgirlariesgirlabout 11 years ago

I was thinking the same thing. She is so eager to get her story that she didn't come up with a plan B. With the way her body reaccted with yellow teethed guy I wonder if she will come to like being a slave.

JogrindeJogrindeabout 11 years ago
Next chapter please!

Never mind the perfectionists, its got the makings of a great story! More please

sexi_lexiesexi_lexieabout 11 years ago

why does a white guy have a black dick? I don't understand

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Story definitely has possibilities

But you could use an editor.

subwrytersubwryterabout 11 years agoAuthor
Whoops typo... Suppose to be big cock

Typo

bettyluvsitbettyluvsitabout 11 years ago
Nice

Look forward to more

i want to go to the auction and buyme a black bull

roseloveroseloveabout 11 years ago
lik it

Good story starter but can the men be alittle bit sexier. Thx for the story. Plz keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More!

Pretty good opener - maybe do some more editing. Story proceeded too quickly into the auction itself - maybe some undercover entry background development might have added to the erotic buildup. Overall nice work - look forward to the following chapter(s).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good story

It is always a good story that shows a black woman in her proper place

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what??

It's an okay story but I RESENT that comment! There is no difference between Caucasians and African Amarican men, women, or children!!! I am white and I know that we are all human! Geez! Racist!!!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Blacks

seem to make good slaves everywhere around the world. Even other blacks prefer them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Whites make the best slaves

All over the world whites were slaves more then blacks. Learn history

stillaonewomanmstillaonewomanmover 5 years ago
You really need to iron out race

You say its a white man who is master. But you asked her how she liked your black cock? Wtf?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
This is not right.

One does not write "Little did I know all that I would have to go through?" You would not say this, therefore do not write it.

Pecos_P3t3Pecos_P3t3almost 2 years ago

Nice introduction. Can't wait to read more.

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literateover 1 year ago

So this is interesting and I can’t wait to read the full story. I don’t know of any woman white, black, red or yellow who would place themselves in a situation as risky as this. None. To many variables as well as the unknown and with multiple partners. Uh uh. Smokers are a turn off so I would’ve left at that point. Yellowed teeth, potbelly I mean girl do you really want us to believe she was attracted to him. Just knowing there was a secret society of this “black auction” would turn my stomach. She can’t be this eager to find out what really goes on with some sicko people.

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