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Black Slave Auction Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/25/13

why does a white guy have a black dick? why would she go there with no backup?

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by ariesgirl01/25/13

I was thinking the same thing. She is so eager to get her story that she didn't come up with a plan B. With the way her body reaccted with yellow teethed guy I wonder if she will come to like being a slave.

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by Jogrinde01/25/13

Next chapter please!

Never mind the perfectionists, its got the makings of a great story! More please

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by sexi_lexie01/25/13

why does a white guy have a black dick? I don't understand

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by Anonymous01/25/13

Story definitely has possibilities

But you could use an editor.

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by subwryter01/26/13

Whoops typo... Suppose to be big cock

Typo

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by bettyluvsit01/26/13

Nice

Look forward to more
i want to go to the auction and buyme a black bull

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by roselove01/26/13

lik it

Good story starter but can the men be alittle bit sexier. Thx for the story. Plz keep writing

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by Anonymous02/01/13

More!

Pretty good opener - maybe do some more editing. Story proceeded too quickly into the auction itself - maybe some undercover entry background development might have added to the erotic buildup. Overall nice work - look forward to the following chapter(s).

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by Anonymous05/18/14

Good story

It is always a good story that shows a black woman in her proper place

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by Anonymous12/22/14

what??

It's an okay story but I RESENT that comment! There is no difference between Caucasians and African Amarican men, women, or children!!! I am white and I know that we are all human! Geez! Racist!!!
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