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by SweetOblivion01/19/13

Loved the subtlety of the first part of the poem

I think you might have been slightly less obvious in the denouement. Sweet O.

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by tazz31701/19/13

FEED THE WHORE

who lamely tried to feed her lord, TK U MLJ LV NV

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