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Homeless Heart

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by Anonymous

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by Racholobo2601/20/13

Wow

Loved this! Struck a chord with my spontaneous side.

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by Understatement01/20/13

Very nice

Will there be a second one?? Kinda curious!! Love the story line!! 5 stars!!

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by DawnJ01/20/13

*chuckles*

I smiled through this story, something I don't often do when the men are jerks! Thanks for that! And what a lovely surprise of a tale! It's like the beginning of something magical! I wish it would continue till the end! *sigh* If wishes were horses, eh?

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by YDB9501/21/13

Good work

Clever ending, and nice to see her break free of the jerk.

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Looking good.

The story was fantastic. Follow up with more. Have him lick and suck her asshole and tongue fuck it too. Describe the funky scent and taste from her working all morning. That would be excellant.

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5 stars!

Maybe its seeing her dump the jerk and find someone who appears to be more deserving, but I really enjoyed this. Hoping for a second part!

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by rightbank10/29/14

don't look now but

the new guy is just as shallow as jerk #1.

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