All Comments on 'Ellen Journals 05. Lovely Aura'

by josquin2

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Nicely done. I especially liked the unstated communication between the two women. The naturalness of the characters in a most unusual situation made the story unfold like an afternoon drive down a country lane. Bravo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Huh?

Being a guy, there are parts of the unspoken communication between these women that I don't understand. That said, I found the story warm, tender, loving, and hot. Thank you.

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