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Zaka's Wings Ch. 03

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by Anonymous01/25/13

Your story is real good,

But, they are a little (or maybe a LOT) too short!
... Most people won't mind if you take just a little longer to produce two lit pages (Aim for 8 - 10 Word Processing pages).
- TheGryphonsOnFIRE (Blasted Lit not taking password!)

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