All Comments on 'Once a Year'

Wow, what a story .. events and details down to a T ... a story well worth the read and such a creative and imaginative mind. you have the ability to write so well, you definitely should continue to write. so many delicious moments, one that I can and will read over and over!!!

Tough use but balanced with care. Thank you for limited use of the usual name calling (bitch, slut, etc).

One nit to pick-when using the cane he hit across her lower back-can you say kidney damage.......

Great job!!!!