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by Rawmaster5001/25/13

Scary story

But very well done as it leads to more scary stories. The thoughts and personalities vanishing under the control of the master is so complete and so fast.
I wonder how many stories are going to follow this one and if mankind will survive. Yeah there was sex and hot women acting in a manner that is inconsistent with the norm.
Now the question is how will Alex act? Waiting for more.

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by wl300232301/31/13

Excellent!

Great continuation. Perfect. Please, do write the next part!

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by Anonymous01/31/13

So Hot!!

I wish this could actually happen!!

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by Anonymous02/10/13

Amazing

This was a fabulous story. Please continue your "masterful" work, creating a series. Enjoyed the writing and theme immensely.

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by jkthekat09/15/15

very erotic

Would love more chapters!

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