I dont know how you did it, but somehow you managed to make a great story an even greater one. Friend I am really really excited to read the next part, and i hope you dont do what alot of good writers do and stop partway because it would be an injustice to your talent to not finish this story.
PS. there are a few misspelled things and a few times you refered to Cricket as soccer, in case you did not realize it.
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