All Comments on 'Pleasure and Pain'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Oh, the Joy!

I found a story under BDSM in which no one is called names, peed on or in, used into catatonia or left naked in the middle of nowhere! That alone is rapture for me. Safe word, aftercare, omg a medic. RACKRACKRACK.

Thank you from all the corners of my soul.

AG31AG317 months ago

Splendid!!! This is what I call "pure erotica," and others call "stroke stories." The latter has negative connotations. There is skill in writing only about arousal, not character and plot, and you definitely have the nack. Thanks!

Clever set up.

As an aside, you may find it interesting to know that for many paragraphs I assumed the MC was male. I had searched for BDSM, tag male.

AG31AG317 months ago

This is my second comment about this story in two days. I thought about it a lot last night. Savored it. That, to me, is a mark of really good story telling!

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