All Comments on 'The Birthday Fairy'

Nm

Husband and wife showing their love as they should and as God intended.

Confused. It is a sweet, TLW story. However, at the end, there is an ambiguous hint that Viagra was used to insure the regular marital sex they often enjoyed, albeit perhaps normally a little earlier in the night. I detected NO hint that he would have prepared himself in that fashion, nor that she would have slipped him a 'Vickie' (just made that up!)

It was presented that he would have been OK with getting some ZZZs, but that Sweetie took it upon herself to up the ante a little! I then understand that he came too soon and had to resort to G-spot massage to,at least, give Sweetie one of the two climaxes he thought would be a fair ratio! None of that is compatible with a healthy 25-35 year-old man using ED meds recreationally! Confused!

In my opinion, LOSE the Viagra comment!

4*

Ordinary married couple - a hint of a tease - the comfortableness of intimacy and mundanity- thanks for writing. 4*

That felt deliciously real.

A very realistic story about the way sex usually happens.

the touch of realism makes it good.

This was very sweet and realistic.It's just my preference that short stories -- erotica and otherwise -- include some kind of tension, conflict (to be resolved/not resolved) or surprise. Extraordinary things can happen to ordinary people.