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by meh491201/27/13

Good story

I liked it and would read more of your work if you post. And, I hope you do.

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by guysimple167401/27/13

keep it up

It is nice, though you may provide more details about the girl's feelings and how she slowly loses herself in the lust. It would be interesting to know if she is married!

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by Anonymous01/27/13

awesome!

that was super sexy. i loved it!!!

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by Anonymous01/28/13

more

Please share more.

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by Anonymous01/28/13

Gewd

I liked it. Make it a series!

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by Anonymous01/28/13

Keep writing

This is a good start. What happens next? Does he take her home? Does she become his sex slave?

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by Anonymous01/29/13

love it!

I would love to see where you go with this! Please continue it!

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by Anonymous01/29/13

Excellent

Great story, this would make a great series, please continue

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by lil_one8901/30/13

thank you!

Thank you guys so much for the comments!! I am working on another separate story atm but maybe I can find some time to continue this one as well.

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by Anonymous09/06/13

A little short...

I saw it was a little short because I enjoyed it so much.

I would love to read more!

-MisterGear

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