All Comments on 'His Cajun Moon Ch. 05'

This was so good! I just hope it wont take so long for chapter 6

i cant wait to read the next chapter

Great story!!! Can't wait to see what else happens!!!!

I'm glad you continued this! I hope the crazy drug dealer meets a very violent end.

Overall, a good read. Considering you've already completed 5 chapters however, you may want to run your future stories through an editor or beta reader, or both. Your existing editor, if you have one, isn't doing anything close to helping you with basic grammatical errors and with spelling, These errors seem to always be right there on the cusp of ruining the flow and the mood of the story.

Despite all this, this story has the makings of being VERY good, and am looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you!

~rewski84

And it reads like a lot of the Cajuns I have known through the years talk. Not bad at all and I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Hey, enjoyed this chapter. Just why did it take u so long?

Im a new reader and man what a story!!!!

This is an incredible story!!!!!

This is such a wonderful story!!!

Please do no make us wait another year. I gave up a we months ago and was pleasantly surprised to see a new chapter! Thanks

Fiiiiiiiiiinally!!!!!

Your story is fantastic and I can't wait for you to shard the next chapter.

please let them have a baby together, there's nothing like having a child of your

own. Lizzy is great but they need someone that is a part of their love. When she

morph into a wolf she should be able to carry a baby full term, at least I hope so

I love your story.

Très bien. JE SUIS VRAIMENT AMOUREUSE DE CETTE HISTOIRE. SUIS TOMBÉ SUR ELLE CE MATIN. ADORERAIS EVIE POUR AMIS À TROUVER IL S'ACCOUPLE DANS LA BANQUISE. J'ADORERAIS VOIR EVIE FOUET MARIEANNE ET DE DARRELL LE CUL AUSSI. PROCHAIN CHAPITRE S'IL VOUS PLAÎT.

VERY GOOD. I'M DEFINITELY LOVING THIS STORY. STUMBLED UPON IT THIS MORNING. WOULD LOVE FOR EVIE FRIENDS TO FIND THERE MATES WITHIN THE PACK. WOULD LOVE TO SEE EVIE WHIP MARIEANNE AND DARRELL'S ASS ALSO. NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE.

sooooooooo much for this update; i waited forever

I'm so happy that u updated this story. It was a great update.

great chapter and I cant wait for the next one but please let me mate before anything else happens

More please! Loving this so far, Can't wait

its getting good and i want moreeeeeeeeeee

Lots of great lovin' in this story. A couple of power hungry idiots and one evil dude coming for them. I can't wait for them to get what's coming to them. Bring it on!

Omg I love this story. cant wait till Evie meets this crazy bia trying to take her man. Hopefully her friends will be mates to his brothers!! Please dont wait another year!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is amazing.

I hope you continue Evie's and Ray's story...would love to read more about them and her two besties :)

Awesome lovemaking details...sexy and sensual!

Keep up the good work and thank you for exposing me to a non-human story...I might be getting hooked ;) !

Dr. P

I really hope you are going to finish this story, Darrell/Antonio needs to meet his end. I would like to see them adopt Lizzy, and the Hanson family get there butts kicked some more. But your editor needs an proofreader as Shirley's name became Sheila.

I really hope you are going to finish this story, Darrell/Antonio needs to meet his end. I would like to see them adopt Lizzy, and the Hanson family get there butts kicked some more. But your editor needs an proofreader as Shirley's name became Sheila. Chelsea or Michelle would be good for JP.

Is there going to be more????I hope you dont leave us hanging,,its a good story,,it been 7 months since this was posted,,,,,dont be another unfinished story on here,,,,please

please don't forget about this story, i hope you update soon

Please continue this story. It is a great story with lots sex , sass, and love. Please update soon.

I love your balls lmao love that part love love this story. I can't wait for more!

Love this story. Please write more chapters. I love the mix of humor, sex and good feeling you get when I read your chapters.

I love this story!!!!! Please write more chapters.

I need you to finish, i am in love.

Can u please update this story, I come here every day just to see if you updated this story. It has been a while since you last wrote another chapter please update I'm about to give up on this story and it would be a shame because it was my faverite one on the whole site.

I keeping reading this series hoping that you will complete it. I was hoping that Michelle and Chelsea would come and be the mates of John Paul and James and they (Ray, JP, and James) would get rid of Antonio (Darrell) and that the drama would be began when Evie found out about the possible other mate that Ray was suppose to have and give her want for. Love JP he is so comical, this story really picks me up when I need a good laugh. Please finish, your readers are wanting the rest of the story.

U HAVE TO ADD MORE !! U CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THIS!!

Pls finish the story.

Please finish the story, I can hardly wait to find out how it continues/ends!

I would love it if you are able to at least double the length of the story....... hint hint ;-)

Just love the story.. Want to see it end and find out do they keep lizzy.. Killing me.

This was a better chapter than the other two. More descriptions and details.

I especially liked the love/sex scene in the last part. Wish he just mounted her there and then so no one can take her!

This is too good to stop now.

You have to come back and finish this!!! Such a great story, I'm dying to see how it all plays out.

I've read this story several times hoping you would come back and finish this story. Even though there are many misspelled words and use of the wrong words in some sentences, I've still enjoyed the story, it just made it harder to read and at times frustrating. Please come back so we can read what happens when her girls and that Darrel goes to Louisiana. Please come back!!! Are you still alive???

This is a great story please finish it. I'm dying to see how it plays out

Please update

Where are the next chapters? We need an update!!

For an update please!

I somehow returned to this story, after reading it when it was originally posted. Still so awesome!

Hope you pick up where you left off. Great build up story

It’s seems like I read this story somewhere and I’m trying to find it. Because I know what happens next with them and the best friends.

I don't know WHAT I was thinking to read a story that hasn't been updated in YEARS!! Why did you stop? This story is FANTASTIC! I hope you eventually return to add more chapters!

Please please please update this story! I’ve loved it for years and came back to Literotica just to read it again ❤️