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I love the line : all pinings consigned to pine and the tree imagery. This is very evocative- so much so that I do not think you actually needed to use the word tomb in the poem at all. I think the weakest line is " all joys given to memory" - it just doesn't make sense to me (whose memory?). Overall, I liked this very much.
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for us all, If we are lucky. TK U MLJ LV NV
Wonderful -
very evocative - and I love the return to the first line, coming full circle.
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