Oh, no. Is it Donny? Please don't make him into a psycho. I really like him. I know he is a dollar short and a day late but I want him to find happiness and Kachi just does not see him like that. I mean if she hasn't noticed him in all these years as potentially something more, I doubt she does when he tells her how he really feels. Gosh, I would hate to be in his shoes or even hers for that matter. I don't know if their friendship can handle this. I think it could on Kachi's end, but Donny is in love with her/infatuated. I know he will not be able to sit back as the supportive best friend and watch her live happily ever after with someone else. That being sad, Donny has to let it go and accept the fact that Kachi does not love him like that. He is a glorified brother to Kachi. Yes, his feelings will be bloody hurt, but he is going to have to move on and hopefully to someone who loves him how he loves Kachi and vice versa. Loved it!!!
You really know how to keep us in suspense. Can't wait for them to properly hook up already. Great first date. Pretty sure I know who's lurking in Kachi's apartment. Waiting to see if I'm right.
Donny would not be able to handle Kachi with another man.
It seems like alot of people were interested in Jeremy and Kachi's date.
Im willing to bet that the Lexus following them was Claire or at least someone hired by her.
As for the intruder...I cant think of a man who would be so intensely angry seeing Kachi kissed other than Donny and maybe her father, lol. I can see why Phi would allow him into her apartment, or maybe he even has a key who knows.
Sheesh, Kachi is sure attracting some aggressive negative male attention lately. Please dont make this into a story about her being sexually assaulted.
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Anonymous01/27/13
i love this story. cantbuymy
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Anonymous01/27/13
Am loving it
Am loving this story and wish to thank you for the quick updates. I know it takes a huge effort on your part !
IMO I would rather you don't get taken up with the drama and suspense aspects on your Story. Many a time, Lit erotica authors take such a route and because the readers begin to expect that, the writers have to keep it up but after a while they can't then we hear about the writers block problem.
A romance without so many twists, turns and suspense is just fine.
I don't see what is about to happen ending well at all, great story I am hooked already.
For the love of Mike please let her backhand Donny and Claire both just sayin lol
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Anonymous01/28/13
Great story!
Love it! Looking forward to when Donny, Claire, and Phi are cut out lol...(I know wishful thinking). You're a great writer. Enjoying this story a lot.
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Anonymous01/29/13
Phi...
While I love the main story, will you go more in dpth with Phi and Keith? Loving Kachi and Jeremy together!!!
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Anonymous03/07/13
Phi and Keith
if ur unsure or a story to write after this ...phi and Keith should be interesting :)
This story is so good. Five golden stars you deserve and more. Claire and Donnie
are crazy i wouldn't lower myself like that by going after somebody that don't want
me. They have issue stalking people. Good job with writing this story and keep up
the great work. Thanks again!!!!!!
English
*****
Five.
LOVED IT!!
Oh, no. Is it Donny? Please don't make him into a psycho. I really like him. I know he is a dollar short and a day late but I want him to find happiness and Kachi just does not see him like that. I mean if she hasn't noticed him in all these years as potentially something more, I doubt she does when he tells her how he really feels. Gosh, I would hate to be in his shoes or even hers for that matter. I don't know if their friendship can handle this. I think it could on Kachi's end, but Donny is in love with her/infatuated. I know he will not be able to sit back as the supportive best friend and watch her live happily ever after with someone else. That being sad, Donny has to let it go and accept the fact that Kachi does not love him like that. He is a glorified brother to Kachi. Yes, his feelings will be bloody hurt, but he is going to have to move on and hopefully to someone who loves him how he loves Kachi and vice versa. Loved it!!!
Progression
You really know how to keep us in suspense. Can't wait for them to properly hook up already. Great first date. Pretty sure I know who's lurking in Kachi's apartment. Waiting to see if I'm right.
I knew...
Donny would not be able to handle Kachi with another man.
It seems like alot of people were interested in Jeremy and Kachi's date.
Im willing to bet that the Lexus following them was Claire or at least someone hired by her.
As for the intruder...I cant think of a man who would be so intensely angry seeing Kachi kissed other than Donny and maybe her father, lol. I can see why Phi would allow him into her apartment, or maybe he even has a key who knows.
Sheesh, Kachi is sure attracting some aggressive negative male attention lately. Please dont make this into a story about her being sexually assaulted.
i love this story. cantbuymy
Am loving it
Am loving this story and wish to thank you for the quick updates. I know it takes a huge effort on your part !
IMO I would rather you don't get taken up with the drama and suspense aspects on your Story. Many a time, Lit erotica authors take such a route and because the readers begin to expect that, the writers have to keep it up but after a while they can't then we hear about the writers block problem.
A romance without so many twists, turns and suspense is just fine.
Jean
Ohh!
I don't see what is about to happen ending well at all, great story I am hooked already.
For the love of Mike please let her backhand Donny and Claire both just sayin lol
Great story!
Love it! Looking forward to when Donny, Claire, and Phi are cut out lol...(I know wishful thinking). You're a great writer. Enjoying this story a lot.
Phi...
While I love the main story, will you go more in dpth with Phi and Keith? Loving Kachi and Jeremy together!!!
Phi and Keith
if ur unsure or a story to write after this ...phi and Keith should be interesting :)
love this story
This story is so good. Five golden stars you deserve and more. Claire and Donnie
are crazy i wouldn't lower myself like that by going after somebody that don't want
me. They have issue stalking people. Good job with writing this story and keep up
the great work. Thanks again!!!!!!
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