by Robin_G
I used to take long walks there once a week. I even proposed to my wife there. And I certainly thought about doing something daring up on that tower. Among other secluded spots...
Sex scene feels very rushed although certain portions of it are quite good. The ending is hurried to in a way that detracts from the entire story. It's better to be very descriptive and well written about one sex act than to write hastily about 3 or 4. The whole thing could have been about one long descriptive blowjob and probably made even a better story to read. In all I'd give a 7/10