A Dish Best Served Cold

Too far over the top, and doesn't really make sense either. Here's a guy who moaned to himself about losing control, and not beating her with his fists in a fit of passion, then goes on to arrange to have her murdered. That's hot-blooded, not cold, and in context of his spit-slathering vitriol, doesn't come across anywhere as neatly.

Also, are we naturally supposed to conclude that this masterminding idiot is going to jail after the police note that his wife and her lover died just the way a character in his stories do? No cop is going to overlook that.

Goodbye to the cheating whore

Awesome all cheaters should get a dose of reality. Love the way the whore says lets just go home and talk about this. What the fuck are women that stupid nothing to talk about your pussy is worthless why would any man want to touch you again.

yes!

amen brother (crunch)

actually a very good solution to a very bad problem

only real problem is he will have to wait to file for abandonment and then the time period for the divorce to be final.

A very fitting end to two worthless pieces of trash.

consequences - and she thought she was smart enough to keep this hidden ....

A little sick story here.

Way over the top. Murder his wife and her lover.if the police put it together he is going away for a long time. I can see slapping the bitch and having some gang rape her but murder and no.better he hid his assets and got rid of her without exposing himself. Divorce and humiliation. And proverty would be a good way to revenge this

terrible story the auther needs some serious help.

worse story i've read the past year

There's a reason I like your writings.

Whether I condone something or not, you wrote it well enough to be believable. I cannot blame another man for the way he'd react under such a circumstance, even if I would do different.

Great Story. The Author is Perfectly Sane.

What betrayed husband hasn't had this type of fantasy when dealing with a cheating whore skank slut cunt wife. I think like this every day.

OH YEAH

HA HA HA HA HA

No explanation

of why she cheated, and that makes the story cold as well as evil.
Was the husband inadequate (sounds likely from what he chose to do), did he ignore and neglect her (also seems possible) or was he simply an inadequate asshole who didn't have the balls to face up to his failings and even needed help to get revenge?
Good writing - bad story.

Yeesh

If I should live to see the end of humanity, I will remember the enthusiastic reaction given all the soulless murder fantasy stories that dot the LW section of this site and take solace in the knowledge that the universe is best served by our absence.

Extrapolation

At the end of this story, the reader is NOT sure if the Golf will end up smooshed and gooey, or driven away by a very contrite Sweetie and Bull! Or any one of a number of possibilities in between!
The author, IMHO, has failed to design the situation so that the 'in between' options are NOT compromised as much as they are here! I would start with 'pesky,' like stocking her panties with about 20 crab lice Thursday AM, especially if you can predict 'dogging' conclaves! Make sure nothing can be imagined as originating with you! Maybe some delayed-release emetics in a ThursPM cocktail before she goes out? End up with something, like planted LSD, that will get the lot arrested and put away! The current plan brings in confederates and elaborate equipment!
"Three people can keep a secret ... if two are dead!"

4*

disgusting

Not fit to post

He missed out on a profit from his trouble

He could have sold her cheating cunt to a biker whorehouse and let the boys have at her. After about six months she would probably kill herself.

As for the wanker Simon; do what Vlad the impaler would have done.

Good one.

Seems you wound up a few of your readers. As for the neebish who seems appalled by the murder fantasies on LW, just take a look at today's video games and films, not to mention the lurid books that are out there. You'd soil your pretty little lace panties. Speaking of which, why do I get the feeling the whole story took place only on his computer screen?

well

fuck and suck hard and be unfaithful you will get your JUST reward. Lynda and Baxter should be introduced to the exciting world of Rottweiler sex before the crusher fitting ending

Thoroughly Amusing

Cant tell you how refreshing your story is. So sick of the gay husband cuckold stories. Loved it . Keep up the good work.

An option

When you are faced with a cheating wife and the end of your marriage you only have so many options. Most of those options include losing a lot of money in a divorce and a rapid decline in the lifestyle that you have worked hard to attain. The fact that you have already lost your investment in your marriage makes this almost too much to bear. While technically it is against the law, making her disappear is certainly an option. The only trouble is there is a very good chance you will get caught.

I like the touch of adding the lover to the mix

that way, them running off together becomes an option. Reguard less of the last comment, cheating wives and husbands disappear every day. 5*'s

Amusing?

What is really amusing is that so many comments can equate cheating with a double murder and rape -- or is it amusing?

Sorry but there is no creativity in just killing someone.

Hahahaha

Yup

5* story

I can't say I liked how the story was going, but then, as a slice of life drama, it was well-written and, sadly, all too believable.

In fact, in my day job as a journalist, a few years ago, I had to cover the story of a missing wife being looked for in a car crushing plant. Up North, somewhere, I seem to recall.

good story

but i do enjoy seeing my wife take cock , if it is black cock big turn or for both of us
we try to set up som black cock every week
so hot

So brutal it is funny

I have to believe this story is an intentionally over the top violent reaction to all the crazy wimp stories where men can't wait to forgive their wives. A double murder is no laughing matter but neither is an Ohio or Hard Days Night reconciliation cuck fest.

Brutal

But fun. Well written, not at all realitic, good balance to all the wimpy cuckold stories on this site.

Not particularly erotic

Maybe belongs in a different category? Like maybe Nonconsent?

Revenge storied are old hat

I suaspect the author is a fan of mysteries and this kind of thing was quite common.The anons appalled at the story forget this kind of story is common and is just a story,it doesn't imply reality.Leaving it the way the author did it is possible he just scared the piss out of them.To be honest the way this is plotted is realistic and has a good chance of getting away with it,you crush two people in a car then the metal gets melted down there won't be any physical evidence.The cops will find out yhey were having sn affair,disappear and figure they ran off and with no evidence even if th hey suspected.couldn't charge him.


As for those wondering why cheating could be equivalent to murder,think about the court system that in a divorce will give a cheating wife the house and alimony and 50% of their assets,and end up supported financially so she can screw her lover in their old house...she kills the marriage,then makes his life a misery and you can see why he might want the iltimate revenge.It is funny.that.the commenterd are appaled at his brutaliry but don't comment on the vile wife,who is recklesd beyond belief,acts like an amoral slag,and they are like ha ha so she cheated......

It's

A read.

The biker, of course, has no intentions

of carrying out the cucks murderous wishes. He just wants a go on the tart too.

Where's the humanity

I can understand you're pissed. They cheated on you and you want revenge. Murders ok not a good solution but it is a solution. What I can't understand is why you have to destroy the VW. Years of faithful service taking you from here to there. Oh sure maybe now she is a little high maintenance. If you didn't drive her so hard you would have to change the tires so often. Yes she uses a lot of gas but she still gets you to where you want to go. Why are you destroying her because your wife cheated? Now that is cold and heartless. ****

short & sweet

Mildly entertaining...a just ending.

NO, NO

Not the VW! Use the van.

Well Designed Fantasy

I have to agree that I would never do that to my faithful car....

Back when I was young it was considered that uncontrollable rage
was a perfectly normal reaction to adultery. Nowadays only the English seem to know how to deal with the problem. Personally the way things are going I am surprised that anyone gets married...

"She rolled her eyes a lot, I found out later that her eyes rolled out of their sockets before her corpse was incinerated. I was also informed her mouth was stuffed with Baxter's severed testicles.

"I'm haunted not by her death but how she met her demise, after all I am a man no matter how detestable you think I am. I can live with myself and my decisions because all I have to do is remember my cunt of a wife's treachery.

"Did she deserve to die, perhaps not. However, the world is not a just place and I came to the decision that if she could cheat on me and enjoy it, I could enjoy cheating justice, even if it was finite like my former slut wife's life."

Murder as revenge is perfectly satisfactory in the literary world. To any potential realists; get your heads out of your asses and enjoy some cathartic yet blood-curdling vengeance! Five glorious stars.

Fuck me...

You really do get some disturbing morons on this site...murder is bad but gang rape is acceptable? Some people really need to get out more...fiction and reality becoming worryingly blurred for some of you...

Well written as always, your prose and dialogue are realistic and compelling. I love your style of writing, it always sucks me in and fascinates me despite any underlying distaste about the subject matter sometimes...and I love it when you go dark!

Top trash...:o)

Loved it

Very well written. Incredibly dark, but fascinating. Thanks.

Harsh

This was the most nauseating piece that I have ever read in Literotica

Ugh. You need serious help.

Revenge served cold? More like you need to put yourself in the crusher.

A Little Short on Detail

Could have been a little longer, but over all;
A nice feel good story with a happy ending.

Very dark

But in a Literary sense, very understandable. More men that would care to admit, have fantasies along these lines when betrayed. How else can you explain the popularity of the Iliad and the Odyssey? Menelaus essentially destroyed an entire country! To pick a Nit, Sushi is not fishy-smelling. It's only seaweed. Sashimi is the fish.

Neat.

You even figured out how to get your certificate of disposal.

Another cheating slut wife bite the dust.

Another cheating slut wife bite the dust. Give it five star.

Good story

Certainly dark and but not really a dish served cold, because there is far too much talking by the husband serving the revenge that is not cold but hot for it is anger.
A colder version would be to skip all rehtoric by the husband and hand the wayward wife and her fuck toy a serie of papers describing the same that they can read before their demise.

THAT felt good!

Yes, a bit dark as others stated but, still... a BTB ending and no simpering wimpy husband. I liked it.

Five stars!

You're up to your usual high standard of writing, I see! Looks like you touched a few nerves and wound a few up. ;) xo

Good job, great revenge!

Ouch!

That hurt!

yes, just crushed. 5

Just Like That.....

Be Careful Honey........bye,bye

He did give her a preview -

LOL nice touch - she could not take a hint -