being in the sex for money business is being in the sex for money business
there is no half way
its sorta like saying I only drank half the bottle of poison
this isnt a hot wife this is porn and sex for money, prostitution
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Anonymous01/27/13
he made her want it
loved it and my man still wants me anytime he can. the only damm thing is the black guys will not let pics be taken of them fucking me or of my pussy getting filled. But I keep trying to find one who will. As my man is serving up in the far north. so lets have the next part dose she fuck the black guy ????
I don't know why I find this more depressing than erotic! But I feel the same way about daytime cigarette 'girls' in Las Vegas. Mid-40s, dried-out skin from long-term over-tanning, skinny, implants that have been in 15-20 years, half-dressed in skimpy outfits, hawking cigarettes and crap. They were starring Show-girls in major shows 20-25 years ago, then take a drop in status every 5 years or so.
This story has a shorter time frame than the above comparison, but lets see what happens to Blue Sweetie in 5-10 years ... Don't think it will be a promotion! I'm not sure if this tale could have been told any better. But I'm also not sure if it wouldn't have been better left untold!
which was peobably just as well for such a very sad tale.
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Anonymous01/27/13
The author just had to follow the cliche script
Every story on this site about a wife who manages to have risque pictures taken also eventually usually in the next screen page manages to get herself fucked by a man other than her husband. This story is slightly different in the end but the author implies that's the future for the slut wife.
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Anonymous01/28/13
Proves even emotionally disturbed individuals can write...
Even if what they write is nothing but pure vomit.
OK - I asked for criticism and I'm listening to it, with the exception of one especially vicious Anon comment which I took the liberty of deleting in the interests of world peace. Worst reaction I've had to a story so far. Will keep reading.
Thanks all. At first I was a bit taken aback by the hostility of some comments but have learnt that it is a hazard of accidentally stepping into the Loving Wives section. Apart from the vigilantes against adultery, I upset some happy swingers who thought I was making the easy assumption that a bit of play inevitably goes wrong. Points taken, and my salutes to all who enjoy the games we are talking about.
Here is a man whose wife now lives elsewhere and is a prostitute and the husband enjoys this fact. Write about a real man who believes in love and fidelity and only wants his wife to feel the same.
In case you check back here, Mr BBL: I’m truly sorry you were offended by this story (inspired by a bit of real life) and sorry you have reason to be angry at anyone playing around with the ideas of adultery and unfaithfulness. But this is not the place to be looking for complete righteousness and in cyberspace, as in real life, there ain’t no going back on what’s been done. I will bear you in mind next time me and my lady friend want to write something. Meanwhile, I wish you peace and good luck
English
being in the sex for money business is being in the sex for money business
there is no half way
its sorta like saying I only drank half the bottle of poison
this isnt a hot wife this is porn and sex for money, prostitution
he made her want it
loved it and my man still wants me anytime he can. the only damm thing is the black guys will not let pics be taken of them fucking me or of my pussy getting filled. But I keep trying to find one who will. As my man is serving up in the far north. so lets have the next part dose she fuck the black guy ????
Not quite sure ...
I don't know why I find this more depressing than erotic! But I feel the same way about daytime cigarette 'girls' in Las Vegas. Mid-40s, dried-out skin from long-term over-tanning, skinny, implants that have been in 15-20 years, half-dressed in skimpy outfits, hawking cigarettes and crap. They were starring Show-girls in major shows 20-25 years ago, then take a drop in status every 5 years or so.
This story has a shorter time frame than the above comparison, but lets see what happens to Blue Sweetie in 5-10 years ... Don't think it will be a promotion! I'm not sure if this tale could have been told any better. But I'm also not sure if it wouldn't have been better left untold!
3*
another
wizard with a pen just makes me sick.
The final part was rushed
which was peobably just as well for such a very sad tale.
The author just had to follow the cliche script
Every story on this site about a wife who manages to have risque pictures taken also eventually usually in the next screen page manages to get herself fucked by a man other than her husband. This story is slightly different in the end but the author implies that's the future for the slut wife.
Proves even emotionally disturbed individuals can write...
Even if what they write is nothing but pure vomit.
okay
OK - I asked for criticism and I'm listening to it, with the exception of one especially vicious Anon comment which I took the liberty of deleting in the interests of world peace. Worst reaction I've had to a story so far. Will keep reading.
Hot story
Keep them cumming
thanks
Thanks all. At first I was a bit taken aback by the hostility of some comments but have learnt that it is a hazard of accidentally stepping into the Loving Wives section. Apart from the vigilantes against adultery, I upset some happy swingers who thought I was making the easy assumption that a bit of play inevitably goes wrong. Points taken, and my salutes to all who enjoy the games we are talking about.
Willing Cuck
Here is a man whose wife now lives elsewhere and is a prostitute and the husband enjoys this fact. Write about a real man who believes in love and fidelity and only wants his wife to feel the same.
Have a nice day.
last word?
In case you check back here, Mr BBL: I’m truly sorry you were offended by this story (inspired by a bit of real life) and sorry you have reason to be angry at anyone playing around with the ideas of adultery and unfaithfulness. But this is not the place to be looking for complete righteousness and in cyberspace, as in real life, there ain’t no going back on what’s been done. I will bear you in mind next time me and my lady friend want to write something. Meanwhile, I wish you peace and good luck
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