really brings back memories. wife and i have been married over 40 years and we still have those electric moments. i think back to some of those we had as young married, with kids in the house, and they were amazing. thought at the time they could not get better. what a fool. the ones we have now, though not as often, put many of those to shame. THANK YOU
Good amount of detail and well thought out. A little clinical though and should have been proofed. Typos kill the feeling and too many blatant details are mood killers as well. Don't be tempted to use the slang now, just get more creative. I am really interested in seeing more of your writing. Nice job.
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