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by Anonymous

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by tazz31701/23/13

THE PHALLIC SYMBOLISM

the river plunging into the sea, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Neonurotic01/23/13

Are you sure this is in the right poetry category?

This reads hot, Tess! But then again, I could find eroticism in a rock. Very, very good, you gave a river a conscious, living and breathing.

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by GuiltyPleasure01/23/13

error

this was mis-labeled, it is non-erotic, of course. Sorry to misrepresent.

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by Piscator09/24/16

As a riverologist I liked this.

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